This is my entry for September's 11 Second Club Monthly Animation Competition
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3 comments:
Hey, good job getting 6th place!
This looks good, the animation is smooth and I like the old woman's interaction with the rocking chair, it seems very natural.
The only thing that leaves me uncomfortable about it is that it seems the man is disconnected from the woman. He never looks at her and his eyes never glance in her vicinity. Not that this is vital (and I can understand you not wanting him to look upstage), but it did grab my attention, primarily after he says, "You killed him?" Did you try a brief glance at her after his shock from her statement? If you haven't tried it, you might give it a shot.
Very nice though, 6th is impressive, there were a lot of entries.
You should report her to the police.
This looks great man! Good to see your 3D work again!
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